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Chapter 26.1

November 28, 2007

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Chapter 26.1 Drawing The Line (c) 2007 Sylvia Hubbard

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9 Comments
  1. The son is Troy but the daughter please don’t tell me it’s Rachel. That does explain Troy’s animosity though.

  2. Aran permalink

    Son is troy and daughter is Rachel! Wow… But one observation- there are a lot of mistakes in the novel in erms of spellings, grammar etc. whcihc is very unlike you…

  3. I hope the daughter isn’t Rachel too. That’s too much to handle lol

  4. Aran: This is off the top of my head, so don’t expect perfection. But if you see something, please let me know. I’m always open for comments and questions and critique

  5. Wait…something just came to me from nowhere…lol It said that she met the son at the office…it could be assumed she met the daughter there too…but not necessarily…so could Rochelle be the daughter?

  6. eva permalink

    is rochelle black or white?

  7. Rochelle was described as a mid fourties AA woman. (well at least I thought I did, but I’ll check again.)

  8. Ingrid permalink

    I know this isn’t your final draft and it hasn’t gone to your editor yet so the topos etc. are to be overlooked. I’ve read your finished works so I know you’re good about editing. You said Paul kissed her “bitterly”, WHY??? I don’t understand. And the term is crack a rib.
    Please once again don’t make Shane too stupid, she needs to be more open about what Bethany is up to and get that monster stopped soon!!! Also if the father has been watching her why hasn’t someone (even undercover) put a stop to Bethany’s terror?

  9. I wonder if Troy knows she’s his sister (if he is really her brother). Could be he doesn’t like her because he’s jealous. I would be really surprised if you didn’t have a few mistakes considering the number of chapters you are posting. They didn’t stop me from reading.

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